Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Blog 12

                         My research paper is on Hormones being implanted in cattle. It was quite complicated to organize the different issues that come up in this topic. I had few different ideas I wanted to capture, that is why at first it was hard to make my paper flow without really showing the separation between the ideas. Starting was  the most consuming.  I decided to start writing the body paragraphs before I decided on my main idea. As I gathered the information and included personal knowledge, the words began to flow and the writing was getting done. I spoke about how the hormones affect women in pregnancy, children, and how it all may lead to obesity and health problems. Hopefully it all makes sense at the end, and the reader understands what I was trying to inform them about.

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